Dylan.McEver English
3/27/15 Period.1
For the final exam, I have chosen to do a slice of life. I chose to do this because the last time I shared how the lady got ran over by her car and now that isn’t thrilling, it’s old. So now I thought I needed a little more things to improve this piece of writing.
Things That Happen In Our World
In our world, Spring finally came and the other day or yesterday it was snowing. I actually got upset because of this because, it definitely should not be snowing in the Spring. I find it irritating how it snows in the Spring because it’s just stupid. If it wants to snow then, maybe it should snow in the winter, not the spring.
Something that also happened is that a couple days ago, an old lady could not get her car to start, so she went to go and lift the hood of the car, and the car started and ran the lady over. She was trapped between a car and a chimney. This led to the lady being lifted to the hospital by a helicopter. This lady was very lucky that she didn’t die.
Another thing that happened in our life was that on Wednesday, March 25, more then half the school had like a power outage and in the school’s auditorium, some of the chairs were not where they were supposed to be. Some people thought that it was a paranormal activity but they were just being silly about that. No one knew what was happening but later after school was over I had saw some workers outside, in the rain, trying to fix the wires. That was just dumb like, who tries to fix wires (electricity) when it is raining outside or even anywhere. That could lead to death or a very serious injury.Other things that happen in our life are very crazy, like for example something that happened a while ago I think that wegmans caught on fire or something like that and the people who worked there had to have everyone leave the store while they resolved the problem. This happened a long time ago but people who haven't heard would probably like to know.
Anyway, some other things that have happened in our world are crazier then you could imagine but frankly, I have no clue what they are so I can't share them with you.
Hello my former readers. My name is Dylan McEver and this year is the best year that I have had for being an english student and in the english class that i'm in for this year, I would very much like to thank my teacher Ms. Cernera for a wonderful year in her english class.
It was a little confusing, and a little rushed, and a little weird (not necessarily a bad thing, that) but it was okay...
ReplyDeleteAnd, is Spring a person? I couldn't tell.
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