“villain”

Context and Reflection

For my final exam ( *villain* ), I chose my writing on my favorite villain the Joker. I chose it because I got a 90 on this and it was the shortest writing I had. When I was revising it I noticed that I should not have gotten a 90 on it, there were a lot of mistakes.The original piece was a little less put together; I think that I was not paying that much attention to what I was writing and just focusing on getting it done. To change this I just zeroed in on the mistakes to make sure it was sure there were no errors.

The Piece

un-revised

My favorite villain is the Joker because he comes up with the best ideas, not that they are good ones. The Joker has a twisted mind I mean his own dad cut his mouth to look like he was smiling. The main reason he is my favorite villain is because he is the antagonist to my favorite hero BatMan.The joker and BatMan go at it all the time they probably will not stop fighting until they die. The joker is probably the smartest villain you will ever hear about I don’t know how but he knows so much.He has a answer to everything you ask him.

Revised

My favorite villain is the Joker because he comes up with the best ideas, not that they are good ones. The Joker has a twisted mind; I mean his own dad cut his mouth to look like he was smiling. The main reason he is my favorite villain is because he is the antagonist to my favorite hero BatMan. The joker and BatMan go at it all the time, they probably will not stop fighting until they die.The joker is probably the smartest villain you will ever hear about, I don’t know how, but he knows so much. He has a answer to everything you ask him.

About the Author

I’m DaeJahd Leckey. I love  Basketball, Baseball, And Football, but I also like Lacrosse; I did not play Lacrosse this past season but I’m hoping to play the next season coming up. This year I had a few transitions, I went from Boynton to a school in North Carolina and back to Dewitt all in the same school year. I went from school to school to school because I moved to North Carolina and went there for about a month because I did not like it, so I came back to Ithaca and I did not like Boynton so I decided I would try Dewitt. I think I will stay at Dewitt for next year; I had fun and I think I learned more. Hope to see everyone next year.