Ehsoe Mo Soe English 7
6/16/15 Period 1
Context and Reflection
For the Final Exam I chose one of my learning log writing pieces . So the first time i wrote this piece,I rushed to finish it, so now I would like to improve it as much as I could. When we did this in science it was really fun so I thought why not choose this one because I like the topic.To improve my writing, I added more scientific vocabulary and more details.
The Piece Science
This week in science we are learning how to estimate the length of the microscopic objects. Because objects are so small we must used microscopes. A microscope is a tool scientist used to measure microscopic organism or discover new microscopic organism. Microscope has six main parts:Eyepiece, Tube, Arm, Base,Stage and Objective Lenses. According to Mr. Gottlieb, the Field of View is the area you can see when you look through the eyepiece to the stage in the microscope. You can only see a circle in the microscope because that is the field of view. When you Started on the microscope you started with 10x. 10X how many times the objects is magnatify. Than the force it so you can see it clearly and if you wanted to see it even more magnetify it to 40x than you can see some things you're not used to seeing because your naked eye can’t processed every it see. This was the first time I used a microscope and it was really thrilling for me because I can see what kind of organism are out there that we can’t see. I’ve know that there lots of smaller organism that we can’t see with our naked eye in the world but I've never seen them before so it was the operternty for me to finally be able to see smaller organism in our environment. In the end it turned out to be a good experiment for me. My conclusion on this lab was that microbiologist have a hard jobs because they have to estimate organism that are really small.
About the Author
Hello my fellow classmates of 2014/2015. My name is Ehsoe Mo Soe but I prefer to be called Ehsoe but you can call me by my full name. This year in English class it was the best years as an English student because we learned new styles of writing. Ms.Cernera taught us many different types of writing as a 7th grade student that was different than 6th grade. I would like to thank her for that because I’ve improved as an English student. Last year I would write what just came up in my mind, now I use more precise vocabulary words in my writing. And also Ms.Hoffman help me out a lot in English writing.
I really liked how you used scientific language. It made it sound more profesional
ReplyDeleteThis is good because you use scientific language and for me it is really easy to understand what you are trying to say about that day.
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